Fiction on the Web #2

This time, i read two stories from Fiction on the Web.

First story called "The Lady By The Pond".
This story is like autobiography. It starts with some fleshback.
Author starts when he was with his dad and wrote lots of different stories what he had been.
So the readers can get a pretty good sence of story.

I think, style of this story is well organize by 6 traits . Because, All the character's are simple and well explain time and setting too. It doesn't matter how long is the story about. It's more important that how to follow basic 6 traits while we write a story.

Second story called "Over Coffee, Monday Morning".

While i read second story,i found pretty interest in it. Because, it's a more then 95% is same as our life. We got up in the morning and have some hair gel, stop at coffee shops and go to work.
This is way how business man doing now. and it is quite fun to compare between our real life
and story. It will be little differences between eachother.

I think, this story is really intereting. Because, it relate with our real life and well explains with some dialog too. So, people who read this story, they'll definelly looking back their life.