Sonnet 1

Sonnet 1


You are a lover I shall not have loved
When I first saw you, my heart was beeping.
Your smile stirred me, could not be resisted
Whenever I have seen your face smiling,

That day became my day in my own world.
I want to tell you words of my heart,
But the right time, only in my dream world
My heart is yours, I wish we never part.

How dumb, how timid, and how speech-less I am!
The very sight of you just makes me mild
I don't, but I really give a damn
In your eyes, I only look like a child

The more I push you away from my mind,
The end will be closer for us mankind

Reflection on the writhing sonnet

In our language Art class, we had special events for writhing a love poem.
Before I wrote my poem, I think about my love first. My poem is based on what I feel now. When I write my poem, I got little bit of sadness also. Because, I was too emotionally while I wrote a poem.
I spend a lot of times to focus on the rule of sonnet, for example 14 lines, 10 slivers etc. When I had a hard time to writhing it, I asked Aled and Max to organize my poem. I should say thanks for them.
It was great time to write a poem, I could share my feelings with our classmate by love poem and some points we cared each other.